[DOCS-10858] Adjective-noun agreement error Created: 03/Oct/17  Updated: 30/Oct/23  Resolved: 10/Oct/17

Status: Closed
Project: Documentation
Component/s: manual
Affects Version/s: None
Fix Version/s: Server_Docs_20231030

Type: Bug Priority: Trivial - P5
Reporter: Brian Moss Assignee: Brian Moss
Resolution: Fixed Votes: 0
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 Description   

The first sentence of the second paragraph in Broadcast Operations contains a adjective-noun agreement error.

Also, it is generally better to use 'after' instead of 'once', and the present tense instead of the present perfect.

Current

Once the mongos has received a response from all shard, it merges the data and returns the result document.

Proposed

After the mongos receives responses from all shards, it merges the data and returns the result document.

PR: https://github.com/mongodb/docs/pull/2974



 Comments   
Comment by Githook User [ 10/Oct/17 ]

Author:

{'email': 'kallimachos@gmail.com', 'name': 'Brian Moss', 'username': 'kallimachos'}

Message: DOCS-10858 Minor grammar fixes

  • fix adjective-noun agreement
  • use 'after' in place of 'once'
  • use present tense in place of present perfect
  • use plural for 'responses'

Closes DOCS-10858

Signed-off-by: kay <kay.kim@10gen.com>
Branch: v3.2
https://github.com/mongodb/docs/commit/591d9db145a3dc4ea933a1a7992270209001dec9

Comment by Githook User [ 10/Oct/17 ]

Author:

{'email': 'kallimachos@gmail.com', 'name': 'Brian Moss', 'username': 'kallimachos'}

Message: DOCS-10858 Minor grammar fixes

  • fix adjective-noun agreement
  • use 'after' in place of 'once'
  • use present tense in place of present perfect
  • use plural for 'responses'

Closes DOCS-10858

Signed-off-by: kay <kay.kim@10gen.com>
Branch: v3.2
https://github.com/mongodb/docs/commit/591d9db145a3dc4ea933a1a7992270209001dec9

Comment by Githook User [ 03/Oct/17 ]

Author:

{'email': 'kallimachos@gmail.com', 'name': 'Brian Moss', 'username': 'kallimachos'}

Message: DOCS-10858 Minor grammar fixes

  • fix adjective-noun agreement
  • use 'after' in place of 'once'
  • use present tense in place of present perfect
  • use plural for 'responses'

Closes DOCS-10858

Signed-off-by: kay <kay.kim@10gen.com>
Branch: v3.4
https://github.com/mongodb/docs/commit/ba19f9a08dced828b6719191ad0c48736265452d

Comment by Githook User [ 03/Oct/17 ]

Author:

{'email': 'kallimachos@gmail.com', 'name': 'Brian Moss', 'username': 'kallimachos'}

Message: DOCS-10858 Minor grammar fixes

  • fix adjective-noun agreement
  • use 'after' in place of 'once'
  • use present tense in place of present perfect
  • use plural for 'responses'

Closes DOCS-10858

Signed-off-by: kay <kay.kim@10gen.com>
Branch: v3.4
https://github.com/mongodb/docs/commit/ba19f9a08dced828b6719191ad0c48736265452d

Comment by Githook User [ 03/Oct/17 ]

Author:

{'email': 'kallimachos@gmail.com', 'name': 'Brian Moss', 'username': 'kallimachos'}

Message: DOCS-10858 Minor grammar fixes

  • fix adjective-noun agreement
  • use 'after' in place of 'once'
  • use present tense in place of present perfect
  • use plural for 'responses'

Closes DOCS-10858

Signed-off-by: kay <kay.kim@10gen.com>
Branch: master
https://github.com/mongodb/docs/commit/0aa682457e4627002f3cdb427ff00b816461af4f

Comment by Githook User [ 03/Oct/17 ]

Author:

{'email': 'kallimachos@gmail.com', 'name': 'Brian Moss', 'username': 'kallimachos'}

Message: DOCS-10858 Minor grammar fixes

  • fix adjective-noun agreement
  • use 'after' in place of 'once'
  • use present tense in place of present perfect
  • use plural for 'responses'

Closes DOCS-10858

Signed-off-by: kay <kay.kim@10gen.com>
Branch: master
https://github.com/mongodb/docs/commit/0aa682457e4627002f3cdb427ff00b816461af4f

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