[DOCS-13068] Need help with tooltip copy for a metric in Performance Advisor Created: 02/Oct/19  Updated: 29/Oct/23  Resolved: 09/Oct/19

Status: Closed
Project: Documentation
Component/s: Atlas
Affects Version/s: None
Fix Version/s: None

Type: Task Priority: Major - P3
Reporter: Dipesh KC Assignee: Jeffrey Allen
Resolution: Fixed Votes: 0
Labels: None
Remaining Estimate: Not Specified
Time Spent: Not Specified
Original Estimate: Not Specified

Participants:
Days since reply: 4 years, 18 weeks ago
Epic Link: DOCSP-2982
Story Points: 2

 Description   

Description

The monitoring team needs help with copy for a metric in the Performance Advisor. Please connect with Rezwan Khan for more details. 

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 Comments   
Comment by Jeffrey Allen [ 09/Oct/19 ]

Happy to help!

Comment by Dipesh KC [ 09/Oct/19 ]

Good to close, TY for the help!  jeffrey.allen

Comment by Jeffrey Allen [ 09/Oct/19 ]

rezwan.khan, dipesh.kc is there anything else you need here or can I close this?

Comment by Jeffrey Allen [ 04/Oct/19 ]

rezwan.khan I think that works. One very small tweak I might suggest is spelling out "percentage" rather than using a % sign since I feel like a % sign might be hard to see in a tiny tooltip. Also I'm not sure the comma after cluster is needed. Maybe

"Impact estimates the percentage drop in total operational latency for the cluster that creating this index will cause."

We could also try to shorten a bit with "Impact estimates the percentage drop in total cluster operation[al] latency that creating this index will cause."

Comment by Rez Khan (Inactive) [ 04/Oct/19 ]

"Impact measures the estimated % drop in total operational latency for the cluster, due to creating this index" 

This obviously is an estimate, but the score as it's calculated today is conservative. 

Comment by Jeffrey Allen [ 03/Oct/19 ]

rezwan.khan can you drop a note with your suggested wording for the tooltip from when we discussed earlier today? It sounded like your wording was essentially what we want. I'm happy to offer some tweaks for what you have but I'm having trouble remembering what exactly the starting point was

Comment by Jeffrey Allen [ 03/Oct/19 ]

rezwan.khan, can you elaborate on what needs to be done?

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