[DOCS-2802] edit /backup/on-prem document Created: 26/Feb/14  Updated: 02/Sep/14  Resolved: 26/Feb/14

Status: Closed
Project: Documentation
Component/s: Cloud Manager
Affects Version/s: None
Fix Version/s: v1.3.1

Type: Task Priority: Major - P3
Reporter: Sam Kleinman (Inactive) Assignee: Tim Slavin
Resolution: Done Votes: 0
Labels: sprint-slipstream
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Participants:
Days since reply: 9 years, 51 weeks ago

 Description   
  • remove passive sentences.
  • remove parentheticals
  • add "further reading section


 Comments   
Comment by Githook User [ 26/Feb/14 ]

Author:

{u'username': u'tychoish', u'name': u'Sam Kleinman', u'email': u'samk@10gen.com'}

Message: DOCS-2802: edits
Branch: master
https://github.com/10gen/mms-docs/commit/da5832b9c25e9aa50320a71a62ecc443ef2a8d5b

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