[DOCS-352] Sharding page grammar corrections Created: 22/Jul/12  Updated: 30/Oct/23  Resolved: 23/Jul/12

Status: Closed
Project: Documentation
Component/s: manual
Affects Version/s: mongodb-2.2
Fix Version/s: Server_Docs_20231030

Type: Bug Priority: Minor - P4
Reporter: Asya Kamsky Assignee: Sam Kleinman (Inactive)
Resolution: Done Votes: 0
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 Description   

Page http://docs.mongodb.org/manual/core/sharding/
"but do this is not recommended for production." should be "doing this"?
"processing may occur on the mongos instances causes them to require" missing word that? "that causes them to require"?
"can have a great impact on the performance, capability, and of functioning your database" - "and of " seems wrong - "on" or nothing would be better?
"un-splitable" - I believe correct is "splittable" so this should be "unsplittable"?
"Often, a existing field" -> "an existing field"
"computing a special-purpose shard key in an additional field" - is that supposed to be "as an additional field" or "into an additional field"?
"If a single configuration instance becomes unavailable," - this section also applies when two out of three config servers are unavailable - so maybe it should say "if only one or two config servers are available"?
"the amount activity is relatively low" - the amount of activity
"when you loose all configuration instances" - should be "lose"
"if you make use the aggregation framework extensively" - "make use of the"
"balancing process from interfering with production traffic" - I think we shouldn't imply we "interfere" maybe "impacting performance" would be better? Interfering implies correctness, I think...
"Changed in version 2.2: In version 2.0, shard clusters will not enforce read-only limitations." - confusing to me format - is this saying starting in 2.2 sharded clusters will enforce read-only?
"To control access a shard cluster" - "to control access to a shard"
"file option all mongos" - "option on all"



 Comments   
Comment by auto [ 23/Jul/12 ]

Author:

{u'date': u'2012-07-23T06:47:01-07:00', u'email': u'samk@10gen.com', u'name': u'Sam Kleinman'}

Message: DOCS-352 sharding page corrections
Branch: master
https://github.com/mongodb/docs/commit/51a7f899ddbd818bdd3448e8d798510983fdfc9f

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