[DOCS-3623] Bad grammar on a doc page Created: 19/Jun/14  Updated: 16/Mar/15  Resolved: 25/Jun/14

Status: Closed
Project: Documentation
Component/s: Cloud Manager
Affects Version/s: None
Fix Version/s: v1.3.7

Type: Improvement Priority: Minor - P4
Reporter: Pat Gunn Assignee: Sam Kleinman (Inactive)
Resolution: Done Votes: 0
Labels: None
Remaining Estimate: Not Specified
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Days since reply: 9 years, 24 weeks, 1 day ago

 Description   

This page has some bad grammar:
https://mms.mongodb.com/help/tutorial/install-backup-agent-with-rpm-package/

Under Considerations: MongoDB Requirements, we see the following sentences:
"MMS can only back up sharded clusters that running version 2.4 or later. However, MMS can back up MongoDB 2.0 replica sets or later."

The first is missing a word, the second is pretty awkward.



 Comments   
Comment by Githook User [ 02/Sep/14 ]

Author:

{u'username': u'tychoish', u'name': u'Sam Kleinman', u'email': u'samk@10gen.com'}

Message: DOCS-3623: clarification of typo.
Branch: next
https://github.com/10gen/mms-docs/commit/65c45c9e8012bda7bc0f8286deae07a19d95448c

Comment by Githook User [ 25/Jun/14 ]

Author:

{u'username': u'tychoish', u'name': u'Sam Kleinman', u'email': u'samk@10gen.com'}

Message: DOCS-3623: clarification of typo.
Branch: master
https://github.com/10gen/mms-docs/commit/65c45c9e8012bda7bc0f8286deae07a19d95448c

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